lunes, 11 de mayo de 2009

composition2

- Hello pepe, as you know I'm Laura and I participe in one tv program about the diferences betwen the kind of profesions of now and the comparation with the same job at years ago.
- Hello Laura. Well I think that this is a great topic for do a documental, because the new generation of young people don't know her past and the way how live their grandparents.
- Yes, I agree with you. Now our youngs aren't interested of all these kind of things. Tell me, you're a farmer is in it?
- Yes, I'm. as you must know nowadays yhere aren't to much people, who have this work. Before, this was a great and normal profesion, not like now. But very hard too. The diference betwen the jobs of this two ages is that now the society don't support this work and think that all this work is do it alone. You know this is very important, because this tradition is dying and the people need this kind of products and the first meteries.
- And¿Do you think that one of these days, all this hard work maybe will done it by a machine?¿ What is your opinion?
- I hope this never happens. Not only because I wouldn't can work and my children will live without family heritage, but because we believe that there are jobs that a machine can't do. I know that the new machine, wich are being manufactured, are really fast, and lose lees time than manual labor , such as ours, but this type of work requires attention and love.
- Ok I agree with you Pepe. That's all. Thank you for your time.
- To welcome. thank you too.

composition1.

27 th, Carlit Road
Catelló d'Empúries
14529 Girona



Dear Patricia,

Please you have yo belive me, I miss you so much. Every morenin, when I get up, I think about you, ande the same every night, because I have this situation, this distance.

I know that you're sure that your boyfriend and me have a little romance, relationship, when you're working, but all this is an horrible lie, because you know. The only that I want is be another time your friend like before. Because the other people for me are not enought.

I'll do wherever you want, but please belive me. Patricia, you're so beautiful ans nice ¿ you know that?. Well that's it all, if you want drink a beer, please phome me one of this days.

xxxooo

Laura Alomar

domingo, 10 de mayo de 2009

MY ENGLISH SKILLS IN 009

I think that if I have to show my best oral evidence, this is my last oral presentation about my reserch project called HH urban poetry, I don't know if you can remember my oral. http://red-sweetsportfolio.blogspot.com/2009/03/second-oral-presentation.html. But regardless of my mark I supose that this is my best presentation. If I consider the use of different tenses, vocabulary, connectors, pronunciation and fluency.
However another oral that I remember with nostalgically is the first that I did . The issue of genocide was great and I think that I has been one of my best marks, I guess too that demand level at that time was not the same as now, it is highest.
Now with respect to my best written evidence I think that is one of my blog. One called be a leader. You can see it here http://red-sweets.blogspot.com/search?updated-max=2009-03-08T08%3A07%3A00-07%3A00&max-results=7. I choose this one because I like too much the topic that I've used for wrote this composition, in first. And for secon, because I did it very clear and organizated, with diferents connectors. And the most important , for the selectivitat written, be mature at the time of writing.

My english 2007 - 2009

The problem that I'm having to make this part of the exercise is that not always I did this part of the portfolio and the other is that I can only remember my last comments.


- I recognize all this pictures. You have put it along time ago in your fotolog, really?
- show this text to teach philosophy professor and his new lover Dani, to know what think about it lol
- I know a girl who in her myspace has a photo section called skins of Barcelona where have images very similar. One day I can show you all her pics if you want ;)
- I have seen the video of speakers corner that miriam put in her facebook , is really good;)I hope that you had enjoyed so much London
- lol I'm sorry mesas but I think that all of us are a little bit addicts to the msn, fotolog and now to the facebook. its nice because when I did my facebook I thought that it was very boring and ugly page but look at me now.. lol

FINAL REFLECTION

Analize your work

1. If I comparare my first written document, the email to you, with one of the last entries to the blog, the first thing that I can see is that at the time, I didn't used differents tenses apart of the present simple or the past simple. in the same way that I always wrote in one paragraph all the information. I can improve, this two obvious things, especially after to did the reserch project, because it forced me to write much and repeated all the mistakes in the previous written.

2. Unfortunately I don't have my first oral presentation, but I can remember perfectly the nerves that I had before do it and my rigid position only started to speak in front of the class. Then with respect to the text of my first oral presentation, wich I remember that was about the rwanda genocide, surely wouldn't be very elaborate. I think that now I'm more relaxed when I'm speaking in front of people and that all this people realizes this, I think that now I'm more relaxed when I'm speaking in front of people and that all this people realizes this thank you to the fluidity and the gestures more natural wich I did , when I was speaking about my reserch project. I'm not sure about the improvement in the vocabulary because it depends on the topic of I chose to make the presentation, but I have improved in pronunciation, mainly thank you the experience.

Scientists have found more evidence that the Indonesian "Hobbit" skeletons belong to a new species of human. Indeed two news in the journal Nature now support the idea that they were an entirely new species of human. The team, which discovered the remains in Liang Bua cave on Flores, contends that the population belongs to the species of Homo floresiensis, separate from our own grouping Homo sapiens . They argue that the "Hobbits" are descended from a prehistoric species of human. Perhaps of the Homo erectus.

The first person to receive a face transplant in the United States

Five years ago Connie Culp lived a horror story, her husband shot her, so he destroyed her face. The eyes were completly deformed just like her nose, as we can see in the video. Her facial expression wasn't of a person. This woman has had to resort to surgery 30 times, but always to no avail. For this reason has been the first woman in United States to receive a facial transplant.
However the operation was very complicated. The doctors were more than 20 hours for reconstructure all her face, the most that they could. Although the result of her face is a litle disfigured yet, the result of this operation is a miracle, because she look better and she was able to continue talking and gesticulating with his face.
Science is really impressive. This news is stunning . See this woman with so strong and with this lust for life , despite having this to pass all this sitiación with his sentimental partner, shows how brave he is

sábado, 9 de mayo de 2009

the cuble guy film

What can you do when a mad man comes into your life and destroys it only to securing a friendly relationship? This is the situation wich Steven Kovacs found , a young man who has just broken with his girlfriend and who intends to install in his home a free cable television service.
But Kovacs found an installer a little bit peculiar,who search a friend for share his live. From the time when the cable guy enters in Kovac's home tries to get inside his live and it gradually becomes a dangerous men , able to do anything to maintain the friendship with his client.
Three new words that I learned:
- waiter
- share
- maintain

Waiter, there are a snake in my plate

A restaurant in Clifton Park (State of New York) announced Thursday that is investigating a complaint by a customer, who claims to have found a snakehead between his vegetables. Local press said that the client, identified as Jack Pendleton, said that saw something strange in her broccoli and then immediately called the server.

martes, 21 de abril de 2009

Archaeologists searching the tomb of Cleopatra in Egypt

ALEXANDRIA, Egypt . On a hill overlooking the Mediterranean Sea, the archeologists think that under the temple of the goddess Isis, they may find the remains of Queen Cleopatra. The tomb of the Egyptian queen had never been found but some archaeologists are discovering evidence that the priests of Cleopatra put her body on the temple after his suicide, which could be with her lover Marco Antonio.

sábado, 14 de marzo de 2009

write about the day that a dream come true

Now my dream had been come. This is a think that in a few months will come, I'll finish second of batxellerat. But if I have to think in another dream or something similar that I had lived, I choose one day of all my young life in particulary. This is the day that I jump of 4000m of high.

I remember so much that day, because was my 17th birday and the jump was my parent's present. It's amazing because I can too revew the feeling of the wind in my face, in all my body and the adrenaline that I had in 3 seconds. The truht is thatI love live this kind of things and sensations, because in this way I feeli me alive. I had more clear that I want did something different and unvelibevol and just in the moment that I arrived to the station, after to jump, I trougth thta I was select a perfext activity for what my dream came.

For finally just say that my father was very happy too, because when he was young did a course and now gas one title of jump in this high. It's nice thar my dady and me, have a similar likes. I hope revive another time all this very soon.



Now my dream will be fulfilled very soon, this is to finish second batxillerat. But if I have to think in another dream or something similar that I had lived, I choose one day of all my young life in particulary. This is the day that I jump of 4000m of high.

I remember so much that day, because was my 17th birday and the jump was my parent's present. It's amazing because I can too revive the feeling of the wind in my face, in all my body and the adrenaline that I had in 3 seconds. the truth is that I love live this kind of things and sensations, because in this way I feel alive. I had very clear that I want did something different and unbelievable and just in the moment that I arrived to the station, after to jump, I thought that I was select a perfect activity for what my dream came.

For finally just say that my father was very happy too, because when he was young did a course and now gas one title of jump in this high. It's nice thar my dady and me, have a similar likes. I hope revive another time all this very soon.

domingo, 8 de marzo de 2009

second oral presentation

this is my second oral presentation. I talked about my reserch project
called HH urban poetry
enjoy it ;)

lunes, 16 de febrero de 2009

Dies in a crime after denouncing the abuse

In this press release is violated the right to physical and psychological integrity of humans.

Cristina M. R. , 29 years old , died yesterday in the afternoon at his home in Cigüeña street in a neighborhood of Los Pajaritos in Sevilla.The alleged killer was her husband, Pedro C. M. 27 years old, according to police sources it caused several injuries with a knife. Other sources indicated that the woman had filed at least two complaints of abuse against their partner.

In my opinion is really sad that nowadays hapen this things. Homo homini lupus. And more sad yet because the women had denuncied twice her husband for was punished she serveral times. The law in XXI century is pathetic. I'm not sure if is better first try to change the sick braind of the mens who do all this horribol thinks or try to change our law, because maybe it's a little soft with the sentences.

But the truth is that the worse thing of all this current situations is the reaction or better, the no-reaction of all this womens for fear. In general is so sad stop to do things for your fear but worse is in this situations, for the fear to one person who live with you and share our lives.Please this is similar to the terror film argument.

For finally I only can say , be corageous ;)
http://www.esnips.com/doc/5b1c631d-ce54-4b9a-99bd-3fde66e501eb/humanr

HUMAN RIGTHS

jueves, 22 de enero de 2009

A man beat the Guinness record after 124 hours without stopping to talk

Lluís Colet, last Saturday broke the world record of longest speech, after talking one total of 124 hours without stopping in any time.

In total, Colet spoke five days in front of a hundred people. He talked about issues such as Salvador Dalí and Catalan culture.The man had started to speak on Monday at 10.00 am and ended at 1400 hours on Saturday, at that time the man was very tired.

During this time, Lluís Colet supervised by a doctor who ensured his health.

aburd diari

This impasse is very much alive

After resurrecting in the funeral parlor, he died.
A bricklayer Brazilian "resurrected" in her funeral parlor after being declared dead in a Sao Paulo hospital but died shortly afterwards in the same room.

SECOND NW

miércoles, 14 de enero de 2009

Atheists buses in Barcelona

Nowadays in Barcelona are circulating two buses with this sentences " God probably does not exist, enjoy your life". The atheist advertising is financed with a private contributions, and now, after these four weeks, that have been run buses, were collect more than 15,500 €. For the time people , who by in the bus, doesn't questioned if they belive or not in God, but this atheist organitation are expected that to soon make think the citizens of Barcelona on the existence of God.

labsurd diari

Hooligans


Director: Lexi Alexander.
Countries: UK and USA.
Year: 2005.
time: 108 min.
Genre: Drama

After being expelled from Harvard, Matt moves with his sister Shannon .Pete, the brother of Shannon's boyfriend and his friends belong to a group of hooligans and Matt is immersed in this world. But not all the group members will receive Matt with open arms. After living with people who believe that the most important in one friends relation is the loyalty, Matt will learn a great lesson.

I like so much this movie,not only for the argument,I like too the tension of some images,but especially for Elijah Wood. Since many years I fell in love with him.


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